Personality Profile Evaluation

The lead did draw my interest to the story but not as much as it could have. It would have been more interesting if the writer began with the amputation rather than leaving it for the last part of the lead.
The lead and first few paragraphs do not outline the story because the story goes off in different tangents. What I thought the story was going to be about was not what it ended up being about.
The writer definitely strays off-topic. When he begins talking about the father and the anti-bullying, it seems to lose focus.
I do think the quotes are used effectively, they all seem on topic and add to the story. They are also short and concise.
My favorite quote was when he was talking about the gym. “I motivate so many people,… Because if I can do it, you can do it. Get off your butt, go do it.”